单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,#,World Expo commemorative coins,Why do you want to have this World Expo coin?,World Expo commemorative coins,1,1.so-that,2.too-to,3.It is-that-,4.With-,5.(The reason)why-is that-,6.be likely to/It is likely that-,7.It seems that-,sb./sth.seems to be/do,8.It never occurs to sb.that-,9.Only-,10.There is no doubt that-,11.have trouble/difficulty(in)doing,12.cant help doing,13.The more-,the more-,14.There is no point(in)doing sth.,15.past or present participles,1.so-that,2,高三英语写作指导,润饰词句，增加文采,高三英语写作指导,3,Dear Sir or Madam,Please listen to my hope.Im a senior middle school student.I want to be an exchange student in England since I was a child.,Its the best way to improve my language.England has many palaces and churches.I want to live with the host family,I can know more about the English culture.I can make some friends with blue eyes and golden hair.I think its cool and wonderful.It can,open my eyesight area in this way.Thats my heart words.,Please consider it.,Yours faithfully,Li Hua,Dear Sir or Madam,4,评点,：,1.,基本交代清楚了来信目的；,2.,没有分段,3.,没有运用过渡的连接词；,4.,表达方式单一，语句欠丰富，,5.,基本上没有高级词汇和句型；,6.,开头生硬,结尾处汉式英语较严重,.,评点：,5,The first paragraph:Give a brief self introduction and,make clear your purpose,The second paragraph:Give reasons or list some advantages of being,an exchange student.,(containing facts,data,examples,etc.),The third paragraph:Express wishes and gratitude.,The first paragraph:Give,6,Dear Sir or Madam,Please listen to my hope.Im a senior middle school student.I want to be an exchange student in England since I was a child.,Its the best way to improve my language.England has many palaces and churches.I want to live with the host family,I can know more about the English culture.I can make some friends with blue eyes and golden hair.I think its cool and wonderful.It can open my eyesight area in this way.Thats my heart words.,Please consider it.,Yours faithfully,Li Hua,Dear Sir or Madam,7,Im a senior middle school student.I want to be an exchange student.,Im a senior schoolgirl who wants to be an exchange student to England for one year.,Its the best way to improve my language.,As English is becoming more and more important in,job-hunting and communication,there is no doubt that,being an exchange student is an effective way to success.,1.,使用从句,Im a senior middle school stu,8,I want to live with the host family,I can know more about the English culture.,It is living together with the host family that can help me get a better understanding of the,English culture.,2.,使用强调句,I want to live with the host f,9,Inspired by the English culture,Im willing to seize the opportunity to live with the host family to enrich my knowledge.,Living with the host family,I can have a better understanding of the English culture.,3.,使用非谓语动词,I want to live with the host family,I can know more about the English culture.,Inspired by the English cult,10,England has many palaces and churches.,（一般）,England is also an ancient country with many cultural relics and fascinating castles.,（高级）,4.,使用,with,的复合结构,England has many palaces and c,11,Only by studying abroad in England can I broaden my horizons.,It can open my eyesight area in this way.,5.,使用倒装句,Only by studying abroad in Eng,12,going abroad is the best way to master,a foreign language as so perfect a learning circumstance,is offered.,it is living together with the host family,that can help me get a better understanding of the,English culture.,one is bound to benefit a lot from a one-year study like,this.,England is a developed country where a lot of job,Opportunities are in store for me.,6,、使用恰当的连接词,Reasons for being an exchange student:,To begin with,Whats more,In addition,Therefore,go,13,1.The reasons why I am interested in it are listed_.,2.I hope you can_ this _and I would,_if you could give me an early reply.,3.I _to visit places of interest in England.,4.I will _ this,opportunity,to_.,5.It is also said that the weather there is_.,7.,运用高级词汇，提高表达层次,as follows,take,into consideration,be very grateful,have a desire,make the most of,make myself improved,agreeable,as follows take-into consideration be very grateful,make the most of agreeable make myself improved,have a desire,1.The reasons why I am interes,14,Dear Sir,I am a senior school student who wants to be an exchange student,in England for one year,so I am writing to apply to you for your,admission._._,as English is becoming more and more important in Job-hunting and communication,there is no doubt that being an,exchange student is an effective way to success._,It is living together with the host family that can help me get a better understanding of the English culture._,England is also an ancient country with many cultural relics and fascinating castles.Only by studying there can I broaden my horizons._,I will make the most of this opportunity to make my English improved if possible.,_,_,_.I hope you can take my request into consideration and I would be very grateful if you could give me an e